Sunday, February 05, 2006

ekhon mrittyugondho aashe

ekhon jibon nei aar,
shiter mouno raate, dhnowamora shohure aakaashe
ekhon mrittyugondho bhaashe|
ponchish bochhor hoye gechhe paar-
koto shoto ponchish bochhor jaabe aaro
gobhir theke gobhirotoro
raate, onaadi otite mrito nokkhottrer dirghoshshashe
ekhon mrittyugondho aashe|

mrittyugondho, mrittyugondho aashe
shoddyojaato shishu taar kheen moothi tule mohakaashe
kore jaay hasshyokor aasphaalon,
chitakaathe shuye taar nishphol rodon
mrittyur oronnyomaajhhe, she shishur khubdho nishshashe
ekhon mrittyushobdo aashe|

3 Comments:

Blogger Kele Panchu said...

Ektu shokto kobita, kintu khub poriskaar lekha tomar. Bujhte asubidha hoi na. 'onaadi' banan ta ektu thik kore niyo. Aar emon lekhar ashai thakbo. Shudhu kobita lekhar ekta website achhe www.kobita.ws. Tobe sekhane sob lekha 'save' kora jai na. Ekhanei bhalo.

Sun Feb 05, 09:52:00 AM 2006  
Blogger expiring_frog said...

Mrityur shukno raate
Amakeo nao ekshaathe
Ami shishu, taroshwore
Chnechay buk bhore
Tobuo mon bhore na taate.

Amar ontorjaal-lipite apnar pododhwoni shune prito holam (ebong apnar podyer uttor shekhanei diyechhi). Nikhil-da amar shobcheye pochhonder jontri-der modhye onyotomo. Ami to apnake chinina, tai jiggesh korte badhyo hochchhi, apni ki kokhono take shamnashamni shunechhen? Amar khub bodo afshosh je ami Nikhil Banerjee, Mallikarjun Mansur ebong Vilayat Khan-ke kokhono live shunini. Oboshyo amar NB-ke shonar boyesh-o tokhon chhilo na :).

Sun Feb 05, 03:16:00 PM 2006  
Blogger hutumthumo said...

aamio pachhi gandho-ta. uth-er griba-r moto janla diye chupi chupi dhukey porchey. tobe bapu aamio khNujchhi kara ekkhana deodorant. eBay ta dekhtey hobey. Tobe je bhabe naak-kaan kata jachhey ei biswayan-er baajarey tate aar kata din katiye ditey paarleyi anubhuti-tanubhuti gulo maya kore dewa jaabe.

Wed Mar 15, 03:50:00 PM 2006  

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